Rough cut feedback

Yesterday we showed a few of the students our thriller opening sequence and asked what they thought of it and what we could do to improve and here's some of the feedback

Improvements

• "Remove sound from the chase scene"
• "It's good"
• "i didn't understand it" but then we explained it to her afterwards
• "i like the settings and location choices, but take away the effect on the photos"

Overall i think it was constructive criticism and we took it into account and changed up a few things to our film to make it more understandable and look more appealing to our target audience. Hopefully our final product comes out how we expect it to along with how our target audience expect it too come out aswell.